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    Hi every one
    I am sending a case which I was practising with me to learn clean language.i asked these questions to myself.
    All answers are in the bold, please guide me if I did any mistake in the process.also tell me can I shorten this process at some where or should I further prolong this process in order to mature the mataphor
    And also guide me where I did not follow rules
    thanks
    What Would You Like To Have Happen
    I WANT TO RUN MY BUSSINESS SUCCESSFULY
    I WANT TO MAKE IT SUCCESSFUL RIGHT FROM THE START
    And When You Want To Run Your Bussiness Successfully And Want To Make It Successful Right From The Start what Kind Of Successful Is That Successful
    ITíS THE MOST APPRECIABLE SUCCESSFUL
    And Where Is That Appreciable Successful
    IN THE WHOLE WORLD
    And Its The Most Appreciable And Its In The Whole World is There Any Relation Ship Between The most Appreciable And The Whole World
    YES THE WHOLE WORLD WILL APPRECIATE MY SUCCESS
    And When The Whole World Will Appreciate Your Success Its Like What
    ITS LIKE THE MOST HAPPIEST PERSON IN THE WORLD
    And When Itís The Most Happiest Person In The World Where Is That Happiest Person
    IN FRONT OF YOUR EYES
    And When Itís The Most Happiest Person In Front Of Our Eyes Then What Happens Next
    ANSWERING YOUR QUESTIONS CONTINEOUSLY
    And When Answering Our Questions Continiously What Happens Next
    I AM TRYING TO EXPLORE MYSELF IN THIS PROCESSS
    And When You Are Trying To Explore Your Self What Kind Of Explore Is That Explore
    ITS LIKE FINDING THE WAYS OF SUCCESS THE WAY I WANT
    And When You Are Trying To Find The Ways Of Your Success Where Could That Successs Come From
    FROM MY INSIDE
    Where From Your Inside
    FROM THE CONVICTION OF MY HEART
    And Does This Conviction Has Any Shape Or Size
    VERY HUGE
    And When Very Huge Where Is That Huge
    I DONíT KNOW
    And When You Donít Know How Do You Know You Donít Know
    HOW CAN I TELL WHERE IS THAT HUGE
    And When You Cant Tell Where Is That Huge What Happens Just Before When You Cant Tell Where Is That Huge
    CONVICTION WAS HUGE
    And When Conviction Was Huge What Happens Next
    I CAN OVER COME EVERY PROBLEM IN THE WAY
    And When Conviction Was Huge And You Can Over Come Every Problem In The Way Then What Happens
    I AM SUCCESSFUL THE WAY I WANT
    And What Needed For That Conviction To Be Be Huge So That You Would Be Succsesful The Way You Want
    CONTINEOUS MOTIVATION
    And What Kind Of Motivation
    MOTIVATION THAT CAN KEEP ME GOING
    And This Motivation Is Like What
    ITS LIKE A STRONG STRONG MOUTAIN WHICH NEVER LEAVE ITS PLACE
    And Your Motivation Is Like A Strong Strong Mountain Which Never Leave Its Place
    And Does This Strong Srtong Moutain Has A Shape And Size
    ITíS A HUGE ONE WITH A CONVENTIONAL MOUNTAIN SHAPE
    And When One With A Conventional Mountain Shape Is Huge Is That Any Relationship Between Huge Shape And Huge Conviction
    YES CONVICTION COMES FROM THE MOUNTAIN
    And When Conviction Comes From The Mountain What Happrens To The Conviction Of Your Heart
    I THINK THIS MOUNTAIN SHOULD BE IN MY HEART
    Where In Your Heart
    EVERY WHERE IN THE HEART
    And Can This Mountain Now In Your Heart
    YES ITS IN MY HEART




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    And when [please guide me if I did any mistake in the process] and [also tell me can I shorten this process at some where or should I further prolong this process in order to mature the metaphor] and [also guide me where I did not follow rules], that's like what?

    P.S.: you're doing quite well for a beginner: keep practising!

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